#1 2010-07-17 18:48:13

 Kamika-Kun

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Moje "wiersze"

Ach tak, moje "wiersze" ZxD
na początek niech będzie taki 5-sekundowy:
„Bez końca”
Idę i idę, ale dojść nie mogę.
Myślę i myślę, lecz nic nie wymyślę.
Żyję i żyję, niech to się już skończy.
Z czekolady życia nie czerpię całego smaku,
Serce utkwione w zardzewiałym wraku.
Umysłu bunt się uspokoił,
Może ktoś mu skórę zwoił?

Wiem, że beznadziejne, ale tak to bywa...

Drugi: <to taki inny poemacik, nie tylko dlatego, że po ang.>
„Somebody, Nobody, Everybody”

Livin' in a world, without a scars,
An unable dreamin' days bright clear.
Gotta find a fellin' that is good for you,
No one is callin' a letter „u”.

Something what I feel, I forgot.
Nothing seems is gatterin' drop <off>
Somebody I named, fell across top.
Nobody who live started to blow.

I was in a crowd of somebody,
But I know there's still nobody.
None of everybody,
Wanted to bet.
More informations I'll break by myself.

Enough to dream about it,
Almost to bring through the sky.
Hearin' a lonely words on paper,
Just wanna rub it off.


i seria wierszy po ang.: (tak w zasadzie to wiersz-piosenki, no cóż...)
"Before I let you go away"

Before I let you go away,
We were all the same...
The life was beautiful,
And I was cheerful...
I hate saiying that but before we met
I couldn't ever let someone go...

That was that thing
It could never being!

Before I let you go away,
we were all the same...
No one ever wanna cry,
Even if someone has died...
Your smile betrayed me all
And it wall all my fault...

(before, before, before, before) I just let you go away!!!
You made feel dumb, so also numb!
You made everybody thinks everything is wrong with me!
(before, before, before, before) If I'll say that again
I'll be on a wrong way!...

Now I know I was fool
being involved by you
that was one bigger time
from the night when I cried!!!


taki starszawy:
"What I was meaning"

I've become so dirty

I can't be happy more

What I was meaning...?

What the hell I was meaning
changing me into this?!
Never even I was truly thinking...
Always when I tried to fly
I have fell and lay on a ground

What the hell I was meaning
changing me into this?! x3
three times - over and over (always and always)
five times - over and over (always and always)
ten times - where's the end? {(I fall again)} x2

Today in that world nobody can survive,
that's why I surrender myself
i so(ooo) want to shout it all out...
Always when I tried to fly
I have fell and lay on a ground

I still want to fly...
I still want to figure it all out...
And I'm still asking myself...


no i last one:
"Everything's fiction"

F-I-C-T-I-O-N!

Now I see that, don't I?
But no, you're not right
Nothing can be real these days
Ohh, I almost forget!
They wanted me to cry,
But I still could smile
They say it's better if I hate
But again I FORGET!

Now you see that, don't you?
And yes, you're right
Everything is mess these days
Ohh, watch out, you can forget
I want you to smile
But You still can't stop cry
WE think it's worse If hope die
But we don't HOPE!

Every little thing, every little thing
IS FICTION!
I can't trust someone like you
I can't trust something like that
I can believe that is fiction!


To by było na tyle, bardzo proszę o komentarze i oceny

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#2 2013-04-03 21:46:46

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Re: Moje "wiersze"

Podobały mi się te po angielsku. O wiele lepszy styl niż "Bez końca", nawet jeśli się je przetłumaczy. Byłoby dobre na piosenkę ^^.
Jeśli nauczę się tak dobrze wyczuwać dźwięki (gram na gitarze, ale od kilku miesięcy, więc mało umiem, ale i tak szybko się uczę, bo umiem już grać i śpiewać, nie myląc się, co nie jest takie proste!) to napiszę nawet do tego muzykę! XD
Nie no. Po prostu świetne i gratuluję talentu. "Bez końca" też było bardzo dobre, ale wiesz, angielskie teksty po prostu to przyćmiły


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